Sunday, September 22, 2013


Ethos (Ethical Appeals)

Definition: speakers appeal to ethos to indicate that they are reasonable and reliable. Very often appeal to ethos underline shared values between the speaker and the audience. Overall the speaker’s ethos – knowledge, and experience with the audience are factors that give the audience a reason to listen to this person.
Visual Example: Icy Hot Advertisement
                                 
In order to indicate that the product is reasonable they used a famous basketball player to portray their message. They appealed to authority meaning that they used someone of higher power. They are certain that the audience will want to buy this product. This is also a way to demonstrate that they are reliable and if a basketball uses it, then the product is certainly great and it works. They did not just pick anyone; they made sure to pick an athlete who might have back pain after a game. This proves that Shaquille O’Neal uses icy hot and that relieves him from his pain. The experience and the knowledge the speaker has, gives the audience a reason to go out there and buy this product. Trying to convince the audience with a character or credibility.
Textual Example #1: Electronic Cigarettes
Dr. Siegel is a professor in the Department of Community Health Sciences, and has twenty-five years of experience in the field of tobacco control. The article speaks about how the FDA wants to ban electronic cigarettes because it is harmful to people’s health. This is where Dr.Siegel comes in; he says that they know a lot more of what is in electronic cigarettes than in regular cigarettes. You can see that the article appeals to ethos because they included a doctor who has many years in the field of tobacco to speak about how electronic cigarettes are better than regular cigarettes. The audience will want to listen to the doctors reasons and ideas because they know that it is coming from someone who spent years studying about what is in a cigarette and why electronic is better. Dr.Siegel said if they disallow electronic cigarette it would harm public health. This is an appeal to ethical ideas because they are presenting their ideas about electronic cigarettes and trying to convince FDA not to ban them by introducing their opinion and facts through a doctor. 
"The Rest of the Story: Tobacco News Analysis and Commentary." Weblog post. New Article on     Electronic Cigarettes Finds That Anti-Smoking Groups and Tobacco Companies Are  Curious Bedfellows. n.p., 16 Dec. 2010. Web. 22 . Sept. 2013.

Textual Example#2: Never Give Up Speech
Jim Valvano gave a speech on ESPN while he was suffering from a bone cancer. Jim Valvano was an American basketball coach. In his speech he appeals to ethos because he connects with the audience and speaks to them like friends by asking them to please support the Jimmy V Foundation. He also gives them advice such as to laugh, cry, and think everyday. These three factors are what gets him through life every day. The audience certainly has a reason to listen because he is a well-known character and he is speaking of how he is happy and enjoys his life even though he is dying from bone cancer. The main purpose of his speech was to convince his audience to support his foundation for research on cancer; he needs their help. Jim Valvano initiates ethos through what he is saying in his speech by sounding realistic, sympathetic, well informed, and acknowledging.
"Valvano’s ‘Never Give Up’ Speech 20 Years Old." Outside the Beltway. n.p., 4 Mar. 2013. Web.      22  Sept. 2013


Pathos (Emotions)
Definition: an appeal to emotions, desires and expectations. When you use pathos in a text or a commercial you appeal to the audiences sentiments. 
Visual Example: Animals Abuse
First and foremost, when the writer uses a type of song such as the one in this video, he or she is attempting to engage a reader’s emotion. This song produces and emotional response, because the first thing you hear is this sad and depressing song which already breaks your heart, then you see a picture of a dog who looks miserable. The pictures shown in this video prove how animals are abused everyday around the world and just seeing how these animals are hurt goes straight to the heart. The way this video is filmed shows you how the animals are feeling, meaning the camera focuses only on their faces and most of the time their eyes. The tone used by the speaker also appeals to the audiences’ emotions; she speaks softly, low, and gently.     “ Right now there is an animal that needs your help,” says it all because she is explaining that they are in substandard conditions and the only person that can help them is YOU.
Textual Example #1: Martin Luther King “I Have a Dream”
"I say to you today, my friends, so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream."
"This is our hope. This is the faith that I go back to the South with. With this faith we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope. With this faith we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day."
            In Martin Luther King’s “I Have a Dream” speech, he appeals to his audience’s emotions. The words he decided to present in his speech clearly shows you that he is trying to convey a message by getting to his audience’s emotions. The tone of the speech also affects his audience, for example when he says, “I still have a dream”, meaning that no matter what happens he still has hope and will fight for this. When he says “My friends” he wants to make the audience feel comfortable and make them feel included, this shows how he wants to convey emotion. When he says  “with this faith we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood”, I believe this is the most important phrase in this text because he has faith that one day they will all become friends and get along, and the use of “brotherhood” goes straight to the audience’s hearts.
"Martin Luther King I Have a Dream Speech - American Rhetoric." Martin Luther King I Have a Dream Speech - American Rhetoric. n.p., n.d. Web. 22 Sept. 2013.

Textual Example #2: Stop Child Labor
This text appeals to emotions from the beginning to the end. The writer starts off with statistics, by appealing to logic, but further down in the text he goes into depth about the treatment these children receive. The children work for hours and only get paid a penny, they get killed if they try to escape, and get raped all the time. These details appeal to the audience’s emotions because not a single parent would want this for his or her child. The writer is trying to create awareness and trying to convince the government and people around the world to open a school for countries where the population is poor and cannot afford to pay. The speaker explains every little detail about child labor and he makes sure to tell his audience that a child might of manufactured the clothes they are wearing right now. By presenting this to people, it might change the way they see things about child labor and help in the contribution of school for the less fortunate in order for them to have a good job.
Faded. "Stop Child Labour (Speech)." Teen Ink. n.p., n.d. Web. 22 Sept. 2013.

 

LOGOS (REASON)
Definition: offering clear and rational ideas and using specific details, example, facts, and statistics to back it up. Graphs and charts are used sometimes as evidence.
Visual Example: Water Conservation 

The “Water Conservation” video appeals to logos because of the amount of statistics and numbers used while the speaker was presenting his ideas. This video basically explains how everyone around the world spends 100 gallons of water, and how no one conserves water. The video goes more in extent about the usage of water and how many gallons it is. They used numbers as evidence, and this is a way of convincing your audience to conserve water. When the speaker uses specific examples and logical ideas to prove his or her point then the audience has the urge to stop or follow this idea presented. This video presents the idea by using facts, statistics, and specific examples. 
Textual Example #1: President Clinton 1996 State of Union Speech
"To the media, I say you should create movies and CDs and television shows you'd want your own children and grandchildren to enjoy. I call on Congress to pass the requirement for a V-chip in TV sets so that parents can screen out programs they believe are inappropriate for their children. When parents control what their young children see, that is not censorship; that is enabling parents to assume more personal responsibility for their children's upbringing. And I urge them to do it."
In this specific part of President Clinton’s speech, he introduces an idea to the media and backs up his ideas by facts; he is appealing to logic. He is trying to convince the media to pass the requirement for a V-ship, which basically screens out programs that are inappropriate for children. He is backing up his argument by saying that if parents begin to control what their children watch then that is assuming personal responsibility and not censorship. The parents are basically protecting their children by enabling them to watch inappropriate TV shows, and that is what will make families stronger in America. He offered a clear rational idea, and used specific details, and examples to prove and back up his concept.
The Three Appeals. n.p.. Web. 22 Sept 2013. <http://papyr.com/hbp/appeals.htm>.
Textual Example #2:  Breast Cancer Risk
University of Adelaide Researchers have made a discovery that points out the role of immune cells in the chance of developing breast cancer. The writer appeals to logos by providing statistics and facts about the factors that can cause breast cancer. In order to get their audiences attention they had an Associate Professor Ingman who is the head of the breast Biology & Cancer Unit with the University of Adelaide speak about his research and what he thinks about the cells. The researchers created a logical argument that involved evidence from experts, facts, and data that can persuade their audience. This also included reliable research and a concrete main idea to show the accuracy of their argument.
Immune Cells Open Window to Breast Cancer Risk." ScienceDaily. ScienceDaily, 19 Sept. 2013. Web. 22 Sept. 2013.







Thursday, September 12, 2013


If the Japanese Can’t Build a Safe Reactor, Who Can?
            
       An AP student, Tamar Demby wrote a rhetorical analysis on the effectiveness of Anne Applebaum’s essay on the massive earthquake and tsunami that hit Japan and severely damaged nuclear reactors. In Tamar Demby’s review she criticizes Applebaum’s essay by only focusing on the negative aspects of it. In her analysis her position is basically mentioning the pessimistic ideas and the mistakes Applebaum did, and what she did not focus on. Demby also stated that Applebaum did not remain in her field, she went on about unimportant information which has nothing to do with her career. She is saying that Applebaum did not present a clear viewpoint with solid evidence, and she was only using logos and pathos but left out ethos.
            In my point of view, Demby’s analysis brought my attention to many details in Applebaum’s essay that I was not aware of, or missed out. There is information I disagree with and there are some that I agree with. I believe that she is a bit too harsh on the essay because Applebaum focuses on very important information and explains and supports her ideas. There might be times where she states something but does not fully back it up. If you use logos, pathos, and ethos, you essay will automatically be stronger and hold more facts and values. An essay does not require holding these three rhetorical tools, but applying them will only make it better.
            Demby’s analysis stated factual information, which could have made Applebaum’s essay much better. There are plenty of statements Applebaum fails to support, and by adding more facts and statistics and fewer opinions maybe the essay will be much better and stronger. She can build ethos and logos by using pathos, and by connecting her opinions to her facts. From my standpoint, the audience can predict from Demby’s analysis that she can be against Applebaum, which might not be the case, but that is the impression she gives. Demby’s criticisms are what will truly improve this essay because she clearly states what is wrong and what needs to be done. 

Tuesday, September 10, 2013


Rhetorical Analysis: Applying Logos, Ethos and Pathos
You are trying to persuade your skeptical parents that a “gap year”--- taking a year off between high school graduation and college—will be beneficial.

Applying LOGOS :
In my high school year as a senior, I have the standardized tests such as the SAT, ACT, TOEFL, SAT subject test and so on. I also have college applications, recommendation letters, acceptance letters, and graduation. Maybe I don’t feel ready to decide my life path, or I don’t feel like staying up late studying for an exam, I would like to take a break from this entire headache. Maybe I have not found a great program of my interest and would like to try it out before going to college.
Traveling and meeting new people from different cultures open up some eyes and make them aware. It can also help me choose a school, a major, the clubs and organizations I would like to join. By traveling and seeing different things around the world may change what you I to do, and it also builds a lot of confidence. It builds confidence because I am on my own visiting and doing something other than working hard at school. By presenting these logical arguments and facts, this might persuade my parents to accepting to take a “gap year” after high school.
Applying PATHOS :
My parents should think on the bright side, I will be much closer to home, and they will not have to spend as much money on a school year when I am not sure what I want to do. I would also mention that I would be miserable alone at school with someone I don’t know and would prefer staying closer to them, working and experiencing before heading to college. I would take a break from school, work, and experience before choosing my major. I would persuade my parents using a tone when speaking, and using strong word choice to appeal to their emotions. By proving them that I am capable also may persuade them. I would explain how exhausting the years were, and how I worked hard to deserve a break from classrooms, lectures and essays.
 
Applying ETHOS :
Using appeal to authority, I would mention a celebrity that had taking a gap year. Prince William of England took a gap year after high school at the age of eighteen. He trained with the Welsh Guards in Belize, worked in English farms, visited charities in African, and took part in volunteering programs in southern Chile where he helped build a school and taught English there. He learned plenty of interesting things during his gap year. This can persuade my parents that if I took a gap year and volunteered and visited different places in the world, then I would learn a lot and come back with more knowledge. Not only would I come back with more understanding, and I would therefore know what I want to major in and focus on at school.

Sunday, September 8, 2013



      Pathos --Appeal to Emotion--


      General Dwight .D Eisenhower’s speech distributed in 1944 before the D-Day invasion of Normandy appeals to emotions in various ways. First and foremost, he appeals to hope and fears He has hope that his force will defeat the German Nazi, and he has the fear that they might not make it. For example when he says,” your enemy is well trained”, he has a bit of fear, but at the same time you can sense the hope he has for his troops. The way Eisenhower is addressing the speech specifically to them by using “you” is also an appeal to emotions because it helps the audience understand the message easier and this is where persuasion comes in. It persuades the audience when the message is specifically directed to someone. Another way he appeals to emotions is by using “we, our”, because this shows that they are not alone and that they have a whole nation behind them.  He also believes in his force and knows that they will come because they are courageous, and great at what they do. He makes sure to give them these compliments in order for him to hit their feelings. 

Monday, September 2, 2013


Russell Crowe's Eulogy for Steve Irwin
Good morning everybody. Firstly, to Terri and all of Steve's family, from my family to yours, our deepest sympathies and condolences. I think this memorial should be a joyful one, and not mournful one. We, after all, have to keep in mind who we are here to celebrate, and what he would have preferred. I hope somebody will speak today of the specifics of what Steve achieved as a conservationist, but all I can do today is talk directly to my friend, my mate, Steven.

Your passing has suspended reality for all of us. It was way too soon, and completely unfair on all accounts. I know as humble as you always were, that you would still be pleased to know that the world sends its love and that people all over this planet have been grieving. We've all lost a friend, we've lost a champion, and we're gonna take some time adjust to that. I’m in New York, mate - the big city - and you have been headline news on CNN for a week. There are not many Zoo keepers who would command that attention, mate. And all that means is that you got your message across. You got the word out there. And you were heard. And you will be remembered. 



Russell Crowe





This speech represents civil and effective. This speech is effective because they are honoring Steven Irwin for spreading his message around, and how he will be remembered. This speech has a meaning especially coming from his friend who knows everything about him. The speaker is trying to persuade and inspire the audience by honoring a leader. This speech is very powerful due to the relationship the speaker had with Steven Irwin, they were very close and coming from his friends makes it even more valuable.